Monday, April 7, 2014

Interview Corrections


He began his acting at 19 and he won a rookie trophy from The New York Film Festival in 2009. However, since then, he has not gotten much attention from audience for a long time, even though he has appeared in a number of films.

Very good

 Kevin has been married Angelina Jolie, a famous actress, for about 10 years but he got divorced a year ago. They had no child.

Meaning       Is he still married?

Kevin has been married once.    He was married to AJ for about ten years but he divorced…..

 

He has been to a few of countries such as France , Spain, Canada. He spent 3 years learning how to write novels in France. Now He is planning to go travealling in The USA.

Very good

 

… has been being one of the most famous actress since she has come from South Korea.She made a brilliant debut as a supporting actress in Harry-Potter when she was 12 years old. Since that, she has been in more than 30 movies regardless of genre.

has been being        meaning       compare:   You are a jerk.   You are being a jerk.

Has been                    has become                        is becoming

since she has come from South Korea.

The writer is in England.

She has been an actress one of the famous people. She first started acting when she was 7 years old. She is a good actress. So, her popularity is better than any other actress. Her movies have gained in popularity over recent years. In now, many people still wanted her work, and future will be.

She has been an actress one of the famous people

She has been an actress and one of the most famous people.

In now, many people still wanted her work

Meaning       wanted                    The simple past doesn’t tell us about the present.

Nowadays, many people still want her work.

Finally, She was inspired from daily life. So, she has been concerned small things. I think these habits make her very popular. She will be grown good actress as time passes.

Very good

 

He also make a friendship with many country friends. Emma Watson and Scarlett Ingrid Johansson is a best friends with Chris Hem swath. Emma Watson and Sang Hyun was a lover in a while

He also make a friendship with many country friends.

Meaning.   Use present perfect to talk about experiences.

He has also made friends with people from many countries.

He gain one prize. Because the thriller book written 5 years ago.

Meaning    simple present tense doesn’t tell us about the past.

He gained one prize because of the thriller book written 5 years ago.

he is born in south korea. he have written very many books, the best famous thing one is thriller and the other is romance.

Capitalize the first letter of the first word of a sentence.

Capitalize the names of countries.

he have written

form.     When the subject is third person singular the form changes to ‘has.’

He has married once. When he studied in Italy 2 years ago, He thought he met the one. He has loved the woman, so he got married with a beautiful Italian.

He has loved the woman since he first met her, so he got married with a beautiful Italian.

He naver lives in other country.

Meaning.    Use present perfect to talk about experiences.

He has never lived in other countries.

He can't won any award baecause whenever he has chance to won award, someone are better than him.

He can’t win any awards because whenever he has a chance to win an award, someone is better than him.

 He hasn’t won any awards because whenever he had a chance to win an award, someone was better than him.

 

He has been married once. When he was 25 years old, he married top korean actress Jeon Ji-hyun. They had been married for a year and had no child. He has looked for a new girlfriend since he got divorced.

Meaning past perfect tense

…. has been in New York for 3 years and was back to seoul in 2006.

Where is the writer now?  Where is the actor/actress now

when he was high school student, he has made mistake once. his parents brought him acting audition against his will. so he had so rudely attitude for judges.

when he was high school student, he has made mistake once.

Present perfect doesn’t go with finished times